Here is my third elevator pitch!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6s75mDm5ojw
The thing I changed about my video based on the feedback I received was to try and look more directly into the camera, to make it feel as if I am talking directly to the person who is watching. Other than that, my last pitch was rather well-received.
This is so much better. It really feels like you are talking directly to me. And this does a few things. 1) it makes me feel more confident in you because 2) it seems like you know your stuff. I feel that with this being our 3rd attempt we are also more comfortable in front of the camera. Compare to your first one, this one blows it out the water.
ReplyDeleteHey Josh, I had the same issue when re-watching my own pitch! I believe that you did an exceptional job in using the feedback you received to improve your pitch into a masterpiece. You really got your message out there in a clear and impressive way. Watching this pitch made me feel like you really mean business and that your idea is nothing to be frowned upon.
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