What I changed about this elevator pitch, based on the feedback I received in my previous elevator pitch, was adding actual statistics into this one. Adding statistics of vegans and vegetarians in the U.S. helped me develop a better picture of how much potential my idea had. This suggestion was really the only feedback that I received, so I didn't change anything else.
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ReplyDeleteHey Josh, I like that you took your feedback constructively which really strengthened your pitch. I believe the addition of a couple of statistics really helped your hook out and will open many potential customers' eyes. Overall, your pitch was neat, well built, and provided just the right information needed to convey your idea.
ReplyDeleteThe statistics and the props were definitely great additions. The statistics made it clear that there is indeed a market that by necessity seeks your product. Also, the props, the cow and vegetable bag, did help make it clear. Vegans like plants. Now, my feedback is that it would definitely help if you looked at the camera, makes the viewer feel like you are talking directly to them.
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